Brilliant, I like ... By: KatFox13. on 02 May 12, 21:46:52 Brilliant, I like your performance :D
Were you nervous when you were up there? I noticed you're voice was soft at the beginning and then began to grow louder towards the middle and then soft towards? the end. To be honest I'd probably be like that too except I'd probably be moving around a lot.
I've kinda been ... By: KatFox13. on 18 Apr 12, 02:27:55 I've kinda been through that as well. If you ever seen my pictures four years ago and look at me in the present you'd probably say "What? happened?"
Another Awesome poem :D Great job
nice... LOVIN the ... By: NightRaven147. on 19 Apr 12, 23:22:55 nice... LOVIN the poetry :) really cool? and unique
Good to see a ... By: 19Birdy95. on 17 Apr 12, 03:58:04 Good to see a honest hardworking? youtuber. Hope you get your big break man.
Colors, when you ... By: KatFox13. on 14 Apr 12, 03:50:18 Colors, when you were younger you use them to paint fire trucks red, the sun yellow, and the grass green but when you grow older you associate them the problems that have no answer. Well, that's what I think, Awesome poem by the? way :D
That was a very? ... By: soccerviking1012. on 13 Apr 12, 08:11:04 That was a very? nice poem :)
Very unique :)
... By: s162430. on 13 Apr 12, 03:10:08 Very unique :)
Great? work as always;
Take as much time? ... By: KatFox13. on 11 Apr 12, 00:03:57 Take as much time? as you need writing awesome poems like yours does need some time :D
When you write your ... By: excusemeimdrowning. on 10 Apr 12, 22:10:39 When you write your poetry do you sit? down with an idea, or does your pen just do the talking? Amazing work btw, keep it up!
Hey James you have ... By: Xervres93. on 02 Apr 12, 17:33:40 Hey James you have inspired me I am working on my? own poem thank you for the inspiration keep it up.
what is an enigma? ... By: cuzimspecial1. on 02 Apr 12, 04:02:26 what is an enigma? btw? that was cool \ /m (peace sign fail)
Your? pretty hot ... By: s162430. on 31 Mar 12, 13:26:53 Your? pretty hot with scruff
Oh my gosh.. You? ... By: KyraT7. on 30 Mar 12, 06:38:31 Oh my gosh.. You? are amazing.
You found its? ... By: iamandyFEARME. on 02 May 12, 03:29:44 You found its? weakness!
I never had an ear ... By: AStaticCharacter. on 06 Apr 12, 16:24:42 I never had an ear for poetry, unless there was a beat under it, but damn, this is pretty good. Keep it up,? man!
Amazing. Simply ... By: KyraT7. on 30 Mar 12, 06:43:42 Amazing. Simply amazing.?
were you like "UGH ... By: ALoverNotAFighter37. on 28 Mar 12, 23:22:33 were you like "UGH got writers block!!!! i need to make a poem? but i cant!!" *magic light bulb noise* "i got it!"
Epic.? By: gintail1. on 28 Mar 12, 04:27:34 Epic.?
I liked this one? ... By: iamandyFEARME. on 02 May 12, 03:23:44 I liked this one? very much, it was.... Kickass...
You are so? amazing ... By: Angelsbloodytears. on 29 Mar 12, 03:25:24 You are so? amazing. I love your poetry. It's inspiring and talented. =)
Hey James you are ... By: Xervres93. on 23 Mar 12, 02:43:55 Hey James you are so talented your? spoken word is so inspiring keep it up man and good job
Very? good By: iamandyFEARME. on 02 May 12, 03:13:20 Very? good
I agree with your? ... By: marzee209. on 01 Apr 12, 22:13:17 I agree with your? sentiments! Keep writing.
Good poem again? my ... By: WAJzCripple. on 21 Mar 12, 21:19:51 Good poem again? my friend !
Good? poem again my ... By: WAJzCripple. on 21 Mar 12, 21:19:25 Good? poem again my friend !
I am? glad you are ... By: Xervres93. on 21 Mar 12, 02:40:36 I am? glad you are finally getting so popular hope your dreams come true man keep it up
I definitely agree ... By: s162430. on 21 Mar 12, 01:44:32 I definitely agree here. I can easily text a person but? face to face forget it
Love your work!? ... By: yankeesboy1337. on 20 Mar 12, 23:53:35 Love your work!? Keep poem alive!!!!!
Rhyming Is Back !? ... By: Jeffrey1999ify. on 20 Mar 12, 22:45:47 Rhyming Is Back !? :)
I know how you feel ... By: KatFox13. on 20 Mar 12, 22:22:18 I know how you feel. It seems that technology has taken away our lives. I miss the? old days where you could talk to someone in front of their face instead of having to text message them. Love the poem :D
Success.? By: drewjhyork. on 18 Mar 12, 02:47:54 Success.?
OMG you have? a ... By: ALoverNotAFighter37. on 17 Mar 12, 02:19:02 OMG you have? a twitter!!!!!!!!
i am showing? this ... By: ALoverNotAFighter37. on 17 Mar 12, 01:49:29 i am showing? this to everyone!! love your poetry, you have to publish all of it someday so i can read it when ever i want!!!!
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Yeah, I looked at ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 16 Mar 12, 05:01:20 Yeah, I looked at this one differently when I wrote it. I went in with an idea and just hoped for the best. Which in all honesty, that is the best way to do this whole poetry thing. Write what you think, how you feel, and see how people react.
I love using words differently and finding different ways to use common terms and etc. Check out my other one this week, "Bent Out of Shape" for more? evidence of this technique.
Haha, don't be too ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 16 Mar 12, 04:59:41 Haha, don't be too impressed, it was just a simple YouTube built in effect. But I'm glad you? liked it.
I can't explain it ... By: KatFox13. on 16 Mar 12, 03:05:40 I can't explain it but I like how you're using the terms of subjects other than in that subject. To be honest I just confused myself :D awesome poem? btw
I really liked this ... By: s162430. on 16 Mar 12, 02:46:11 I really liked this one .. I had to really listen it was different in a good way
And editing is? wicked
Next Video ?? By: Jeffrey1999ify. on 17 Mar 12, 01:11:02 Next Video ??
Stay tuned man, ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 16 Mar 12, 05:03:20 Stay tuned man, rhyming will be back.? I promise.
I Loved All Your ... By: Jeffrey1999ify. on 16 Mar 12, 04:15:02 I Loved All Your Poets Except For The Ones You Have Been Putting Up Lately . NO RHYMING Likee Tha Others ;/ iMight? UNSUBSCRIBE
I have liked it and ... By: WAJzCripple. on 14 Mar 12, 21:03:33 I have liked it and subed because of hownu follow your dreams and never give up ur a good poet and an amazing person keep it up dude? ;-)
I agree man. I am ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 14 Mar 12, 20:37:42 I agree man. I am not going? to give up my dreams. Not now, not ever. I think I am becoming a better writer though this channel. Being able to present my poetry verbally, I can hear the pros and cons of my own writing.
Thanks for watching dude (I'm assuming you are a dude). I post again tomorrow. :-)
Yeah, the word play ... By: JamesZapfelPoetry. on 14 Mar 12, 20:36:38 Yeah, the word play is what I try to work off of with each one? of my poems.
Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for watching.
maybe I was kind? ... By: patt1cak3. on 14 Mar 12, 11:54:38 maybe I was kind? of missing the point, but this one made me laugh because of all the geometric wordplay x) it was very punny!
I believe you are? ... By: SSMSouthernFlow. on 14 Mar 12, 01:42:09 I believe you are? progressing with your poetry and slowly but surely improving, keep it up and never slow down for anybody.
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